I thought I would share any posts about people oppinions here so others could follow a just starting out writers journey.
My first was from May 31, 2012 from Carol Glushwyn
The next was from Ginger Skaggs
My friend was looking for a new book to download on her kindle. I suggested she look at your book. She did. I read the intro with her and it sounds fantastic. It has been 6 hours and she hasn't put her kindle down. I can hardly wait to read it after her!
My only suggestion is to find a better proofreader. Some of the grammer and syntax took away from the plot. Still a good first book. You have accomplished something which some people never will.
I will be waiting for your next read.